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This is my salary of this month. It is paid in cash before September. Now, the Company commissions a bank paying my wages, I tried to use Japanese to explain this pay slip. 这是我这个月的工资，之前都是发现金的，现在有工资清单了，我尝试用日语来解释一下。 I'm a new employee, and now in a three month probation period because. Starting from next month, I will receive a bonus of 30% each month, which will be increased little by little. I will not receive 100% bonus until June of next year. My bonus is 70 Yuan per a day. 我刚进公司，3个月的试用期，10月开始每个月会给30%奖金。一点点增加。要1年后才发100%奖金。奖金是1天70元。 I will obtain overtime pay for overtime work. However, if I miss work due to illness or some other personal reason, I will lose bonus. Our company provides migrant workers with housing which likes the dormitories in university , four people per a room。But these dormitories do not have good environment and we have to pay rent for them. My salary is ￥2095 per a month, that is ￥2000 taking out the oddment. It still have to be deducted 8% for the old-age pension, 2% for the medical insurance, 1% for unemployment insurance, and 7% for the housing accumulation fund. Collectively, the above 4 deductions are referred to as the four gold. 加班有加班费，请病假或事假要扣钱。我们公司给外来务工人员提供住房，很像大学的学生宿舍，但环境差点，要付房租。2095的工资去掉零头即2000，扣掉8%的养老保险金，2%的医疗保险金，1%的失业保险金，7%的住房公积金，以上四项，统称四金。 Old-age Pension: When I retire at the age of 65 I will receive a basic pension. The more you pay for it, the more you will get it. However, the depreciation of the RMB is so crazy, I am afraid that the money will have lost its value by the time I am old. 养老金： 等我65岁退休了可以有基本退休工资，缴的年限越长拿的越多。人民币贬值这么厉害，等我老了，钱也不值钱了吧 Unemployment insurance: If you lose your job you will receive a subsidy theoretically. However, less people can get it now, and it has a lot of tedious procedures to apply for it, so the unemployed had better just using that time looking for a new job. 失业保险金:让你失业的时候可以拿到失业救济不过现在很少拿到，而且手续繁琐，真失业了，还是把精力放在找工作上吧 Medical Insurance: When I get sick my medical expenses may be slightly reimbursed. 医疗保险金:在你生病的时候可以得到一定程度的报销. Housing Accumulation Fund: After paying for one year you are allowed to get out it with real estate license as a loan to help purchase a house。According to relative regulations assuming 10,000 Yuan of Housing Accumulation Fund is deducted from one’s salary, the company should pay 10,000 Yuan for him also. It means that you can get out 20,000 Yuan for supporting your house purchasing. No doubt the Housing Accumulation Fund is most useful to me. 住房公积金：交满1年后，贷款买房的时候，有房产证就能取出来，装修房子也能用。按照规定，假设公司扣了10000元，就要再补贴10000元。买房的时候就可以提取2万元了。毫无疑问，公积金对我最有用。 To be honest, it is difficult to survive on this wage in Shanghai. I am just graduated and still live off my parents, so all of my salary is delivered to them. When I need money I ask them for it. My bachelor's degree hasn't earned me very many points, it is really a shame. But I have to face with the fact, and let me to be brave after sensing of shame! 老实说，这点工资在上海很难生存，我刚毕业，靠父母养着，钱也全交给父母，要的时候问父母要。本科毕业才赚那么点，真是耻辱啊。要有接受现实的勇气，知耻而后勇吧.
Give details: Month: 2009-09 / year, monthly wage: 2095 / to give bonus: 0 / tours and overtime pay: 0 / disability sector hand when the other posted: 0 /その他のhand when the disease do Kuang charge: 0 / illness owed should be sent Total: 2095 /tTotal pension: 160 / old-age insurancepayment of medical insurance: 40 / medical insurancepayment of unemployment insurance: 20 / unemployment insurance fundGold: 280 / residential public Jili gold Rent: 0 / home rent-union fee: 10.48 / month combination of fee transfer Taxes: 0 / adjustments to the tax Others: 0 / ¤のhe was withholding Total: 510.48 / Total control In addition to real wages: 1584.52 / hand to take ri This is my salary this month, before the gold is found, there are now wage a list, and I try to use Japanese to explain. I just joined the company, 3-month trial period beginning in October will give 30% bonus every month. A little bit of increase. To a year later made 100% bonus. Prize is 1 day 70 yuan. Overtime overtime pay, sick leave or leave to be deducting money. Our company provide housing for migrant workers, much like university dormitories, but the environment, almost, to pay the rent. 2095 to remove a fraction of the wages (ie, 2000), after taking 8% of the pension insurance, 2% of medical insurance payments, 1% of unemployment insurance, 7% of the housing accumulation fund, the above four, collectively referred to as the four gold. Pension: When I retire at age 65 that could have a basic retirement income to pay for years to take longer the more. Devaluation of the RMB so powerful, and so I am old, and the money is not worth a bar of unemployment insurance: Unemployment, when you can get unemployment benefits (although they rarely got now, but is complicated, and really unemployed, or concentrate their efforts on looking for work in the bar) Medical insurance: When you are sick can be a certain degree of reimbursement. housing fund: pay at least a year after the loan to buy a house when a real estate license will be able to get out of the house decoration also can be used. According to regulations, assuming the company deducted 10,000 yuan, 10,000 yuan subsidy should be. A house can be extracted when a 20,000 yuan. There is no doubt that the provident fund is most useful to me. To be honest, this wage is difficult to survive in Shanghai, I have just graduated, relying on their parents Pan raises, the money was completely handed over to their parents, when asked parents to be. Bachelor's degree was earned less points is really shame ah. Have to accept the reality of the courage, sense of shame and then yong Bar